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The last years have witnessed amazing changes in the society, while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to whether we should make friends online.Some indicate net friends can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand.Personally, I prefer the former that network friends can broden our horizon,inrich our scope of knowledge and practise our independent thinking. As far as social development and change is concerned,the network technology is more and more developed, online dating has become more and more popular.It goes without saying that net friend may come from all kinds of job in the society,knowing countless social work experience and personal thoght.It can be said with certainty that we can leran from them in numerous area such as insurance and salary.secondly,it's generally recognized that some online friends are high educated in law or politics.A case in point is that you need a experienced financial planner if we need a life insurance plan.The last,nothing is more important than the fact that we can became self-governed and confident through make friens online. As has been mentioned above make friens online is advantageous to us college student.Therefore, we have the reason to believe thattaking advantage of online friends can benificial in our life.
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