高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

My favorite sport Football is my favourite. However, I start and love it by chance. One day, I picked up a football on my way home. Then I played it with my friends. Futhermore I loved it very much from that moment. I always have some training and matches with my classmates. My farorite football star is Baker Ham. I wish I would become a professional football player in the future.