2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。

my views on online shopping Along with the development of people's living standard and the improvement of our economy,online shopping has become a poular way of living in people's life at present.just a saying goes,every coin has two sides.online shopping also has two side that people should face. There are a lot of advantages of online shopping.people usually spend little time to buy more thing that they want to buy.besides the price online is cheaper than real world,and it is convenient for older and younger to buy daily needs.However,the online shopping could not provide feel and environment which real shopping do offer.what's more,it maybe cause some mistakes,such as size,quality of goods,colour and so on.which can't suitable for buyers.these factors should be pay more attention. from my view,sometimes we can buy simple goods from online,because these will not lead to more mistakes.if give me a chance to choose ,l will buy my clothes and food in real store ,not online.so please attach more importance on real shopping.