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Household Hotel Dear George, I'm so glad to have received your letter. Our hometown is really a nice place for visitors. Here's something I want to tell you about the details. For single room, it's 30 yuan a day. As for double room, it's 20 yuan a day each. You can dining with the family paying 20 yuan a day. They have a mamu for visitors. If you don't saticify with the meal, you can cook by yourself. In order to know more about China, you can work in the greenhouse without payment. That's a good way to deal with the family. You can also bathe and swim in the sea, and climb up the hill if you want. It will be a great fun. Hope you come soon.