2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Shanghai,which is a famous city.As we all known,Shanghai is a morden city but in my opinion,it is a great interesting city.Then i introduce Shanghai to you in the following. On the one hand,we all first come to waitan ,so we can go to the oriental pearl tower.When we go to the top floor our sight will be attached by the view under our feet.On another side of huangpu river we can enjoy the expecial street,which owns many a building with eurpo style that is different from the china traditional style.On the other hand we can also visit some trad