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Our meaningful life The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.I believe that we should spend our time in our interested thing,then we will make great prograss.Interest is the best teacher.When we do what we are willing to,we can overcome the diffculty again and again,then we will have a beautiful outlook.On the other hand,if we spend our time in what we don't like,we will have no patience on it and can't do it well. I will find my interestment and do it until my life is over.For exemple,I love drawing although i am not good at it,I will learn drawing.Only following my heart ,i could see the colourful life.Being a volunter is a respectable thing ,we can achieve our worth of life.When we help others,they will smile with us.smlie is spreading around the world,so happy do. Do what you want to,you will have a meaningful life.
