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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
The meaningful life The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.I believe that we should spend our time in things that we are interested in,then we will make great progress.Interest is the best teacher.When we do what we are willing to,we can overcome the difficulty again and again,then we will have a beautiful outlook.On the other hand,if we spend our time in what we don't like,we will have no patience on it and can't do it well. I will find my interest and advantages,then do it until my life is over.For exemple,I love drawing although I am not good at it,I will learn drawing.Only following my heart,I could see the colourful life.Being a volunteer is a respectable thing,we can achieve our worth of life.When we help others,they will smile with us.The smile is spreading around the world,so happy does. Do what you want to,you will have a meaningful life.
