- 分享到:
可是当增加高级词汇的使用，文中有拼写错误；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
more and more skyscrapers, more and more bridges, more and more broad roads, as a chinese, i am very proud of the developments of our nation's economy.the cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing.it seems that the process of urbanization is going on well.however, it is also obvious that the urbanization still have lots of problems.as far as i am concerned, one of the major problems is the contradiction between urbanization and perservation. in terms of the expandation of city,local government reconstructs many old folk houses which may just be build several years ago. it is not only wasting of construction and human resourses, but also the damage of city's memories.with the deepen of the process, the characterastics of a city may fade away slowly.every modern city is similar to each other.moreover, driven by profit, many land agent with government agencies even destroy some historic architecture to build ugly villas.these terrible things exactly exist in the shadow of urbanization. on the one hand, we witness the expandation of city and the rising of house prices, on the other hands, the vacancy rate also increase year by year.what's wrong? do people sacrifice the memory of city just for a ghost city? all in all, as a citizen, we may be happy about the change which happened to make our life more convenient,however, as a ordinary person, the losses of the culture and memory also make us feel pitiful. the only way to solve the problem is keeping balance between urbanization and perservation. something once disappears may be gone forever.
