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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4833
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分57.5分
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文章层次较为清晰;高级词汇偏少,且文中有部分拼写错误;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. As we know,everyone wants happy,evryong lves happiness.To be or not to be,that's a question. someone may think those happiness people are gain a lot of help by important person.. most of them based on good family,gasp a high education. in no case their well background is benefitful. but the personal deligent is very essential .it can be proved by countless sucessful politicers,enterprisers,and artificers.such as QiBaishi,when he starts learn painting,he drew the painting on the paper ,almost one house painting.the other example is WangXizhi ,his handwriting is very very good,when you know his acess way to writing,you will have a good lesson of "face the pool,and learn writing". so if you still a loser,you should look at yourself.find your error and shortcomings,get on the right way ,you will happy. You know happiness is not an absence,go on ,try your best to get it,you will win.

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