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More and more skyscrapers, more and more bridges, more and more broad roads, as a Chinese, I am very proud of the developments of our nation's economy.The cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing.It seems that the process of urbanization is going on well.However, it is also obvious that the urbanization still has lots of problems.As far as I am concerned, one of the major problems is the contradiction between urbanization and preservation. For the extension of the city,local government reconstructs many old folk houses which may just be built several years ago. It is not only wasting of construction and human resources, but also the damage of city's memories.As the process unfolds, the characteristics of a city may fade away slowly.Every modern city is similar to each other.Moreover, driven by profit, land agents and some government agencies even destroy some historic architectures to build ugly villas.These terrible things exactly exist in the shadow of urbanization. On the one hand, we witness the extension of city and the rising of house prices.On the other hand, the vacancy rate also increases year by year.What's wrong? Do people sacrifice the memory of past just for a ghost city? All in all, as a citizen, we may be happy about the change which happened to make our life more convenient,however, as an ordinary person, the loss of the culture and memory also make us feel pitiful. The only way to solve the problem is keeping balance between urbanization and preservation. Once something is lost, it may disappear forever.
