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A volunteer team will be organized to help the children of migrant workers.This activity will begin on June 15 and end on August 5 and it is a group activity according to different ages and different areas of the children of migrant workers.This team will take these children to visit places of interests in Beijing and have a visiting in various of museums.What's more,learning computer and English is also an important part of this activity. these who are interested please sign up before June 30