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文章层次较为清晰；高级词汇偏少，且文中有部分拼写错误；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化。
Hppiness Road If you want to tasting the sweet peal,you must eat it.the happiness road as well. It is not a absence of a problem but the abilitly to deal with them. there is a well-known example .WangXizhi,who is a great handwriter.when he was young,he studied hard,from day to night,he kept writing .A clear pool result in black ,numberless papers,and some famous teacher.all those were paid off,he gain sucess and happiness. everyone want happiness,there is a little number who can gasp it.the reasons of this question is they are speaking gaint,but action none.from my view,we should make a good goal,and fight against it all over our whole life.on the road,we will experence a lot ,the feeling is hapiness. from what we have discussed above ,we can say,if you want happiness,go ahead.
