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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17592
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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文章衔接手法恰当;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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Snap judgments can never be trusted. Peole often make quick judgment in some cases in our social and professonal life. Hardly any of us could always make decisons reasonably and clear thinking .We have always been lost our way in many cases . We can find large numbers of cases to support this proposition. Take our internet shopping for instance. It's said that the increasing numbers of shoppers haste to buy good from internet ,whereas they always find that the goods they have bought are unnecessay at all. In this sense ,sanp judgment makes a big waste both to pesonally and socially. Another good example can supported to this argument is that first impression always misguide us. Many people make assessment to others according to the first impression made on others ,however the judgmeng they have made can sometimes be misleading and untruthful .What should we do is make reasonable judgement according to careful

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