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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5739
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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高级词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

There is no denying that the information is covering with us in our surroundings .As result of the growing use of electrivty products,we could deliver all varieties of informations. As the proverb which is "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention" gormationoes,we are affected by the information expiosion.TO begin with,we can communicate with each other without face-to-face.By contrast,we can text the text message by mobile phone. Meanwhile,we also search the web for the information we need.Likewhile,it is common that we could get access to the irrelevant information,which distracts us.TO prevent it from happening,we can set the avenues not to get the unneeded. TO sum up,the information explosion is dubble-side sword.It is essential that we take good advantages of it.

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