2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping As we all know,with the development of information technology,shopping online has become a fashion especially among the young. There are several possible reasons contributing to the popularity of online shopping.To start with,it has numerous advantages for people.Firstly,it is convenient to buy whatever we want on the Internet.We have no necessity to go outside to purchase something from place to place,which waste a lot of time and make us tired.Secondly,it can provide us with much information about which stores have bargain so that we can get commodity in an economical way.Howerer,there are some problems in it.It makes us stay at home all day and be lack of exercise.Meanwhile,online fraud arises one after another. As far as I'm concerned,shopping online bring benefits to us,for it can let us shopping more efficiently and make use of remaining time doing other things.