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字数：300 满分：100分
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
In our daily life, we use money everyday in every aspect. Money became a necessary part of our life. We make a living by earning money. Our biggest trouble isn’t having plenty of money but lacking money. In my eyes, we must be careful with our money. Fist ,becoming thrifty is of great help for life. When we be careful with our money, despite buying something useless, we concentrate our money on something we are really desirous for. The money can be maximum utilization. For students, we go to college with our parents’ financial supports. When we keep the money-saving awareness in our mind, we will avoid wasting money. Being careful with money is also a kind of way making money. To some degree , it can make us rich. Second, if we can manage our money, we can manage ourselves. When our roommate got a new funny stuff that I also wanted, for money-saving’s reason ,I won’t buy it. In this process, we will learn how to control ourselves. To saving more money, we must make a plan on our money-using and learn to manage ourselves. That kind of way, in essence, equals to a part of job of a financial planner. The way we learn from money-saving will benefit our whole life. We can live without money, because it occupy a miraculous proportion in our life. We must be careful with our money. Money-consciousness is always needed in the market-oriented economy.
