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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；简单句有点多，从句数量使用不足；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
China have many traditional festival,the Mid-Autumn is one of it.I like it very much.Because in this day,all of my familys will come back and have a big party.We stay together and do something what must be did in this day.We can enjoy the full moon.In this day,the moon will be big and round.And we can eat the moon cakes.I like moon cake very much,it is very delicious.Besides,people also go to have a trip or visiting friends and so on.I love the Mid-Autumn Festival.And you?
