作者词汇表达较恰当,也能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;从句使用量稍显不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
In the modern society,information provide people more and more choices.we can liberate our body from the traditional industry,and release the thoughts on many things around our life.Facing much more probability is not only a advantage,but products challenge.Adventure emerges as the opportunity increases,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.