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字数:300 满分:100分
单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Save money In our daily life we should spend our money properly and we should be very careful with our money. As we all know, we can't make money now because we just a student and we use much money that our parents earn, so we shouldn't waste money. We all know that we want to buy everything we want but we can't.So we should control ourselves when we want to buy something.