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It is useful and nesessary to discuss learning habits.Different peoples,different learning habits.But a good learning habit is fit in many peoples.If you have a good learning habit, you will make your learning times short and your leval also will be improved.In other way,no matter how many times you put in your study,it is possible that the encourage you have gave are very few.One of the learning habits i think it is useful is that review.After you have learn a new knowledge,review it.It can help you to put it deeply in your mind.In my oppinion,i think you can keep it.I also have some problems on learning habits.Such as ,I can not keep it going.But now i have overcome it.When I want to give up,i will think about the future.Blue sky,white cloud,how comfortable.