- 分享到:
Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇表达较恰当，高级词汇表达灵活。
Today, computers playing an increasingly important role in our life, despite it is very convenient, the electronic contact cannot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. The Internet can facilitate our shopping, but not as good with friends to go shopping, the network can be set to take away, but not as good as with the parents to eat warm; the network can attend class, but not as good as the teacher face to face exchange of knowledge and more knowledge. Although the network can greatly enhance our living efficiency, in contrast, the face of the face of communication is the best way to communicate feelings, if we indulge in the network, they will ignore many relatives and friends, so, the network communication and can not replace the face of the communication. On the other hand, we face to face communication can produce physical contact, which is conducive to the promotion of our emotional. Last but not lest, we have to talkwith people and develop our ability to communicate in reality.
