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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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从句偏少,建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆;全文结构较为严谨;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

During the common life,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.There are several reasons for it. Firstly,appearance would not repesentitive all qulities of a person.Sometimes someone has a not very good appearance,but he or she show warm heart to everyone.In the opposite,a beautiful lady may show rude,cold and impolite. Secondly,it is wrong for someone to treat different appearance people by different eyes.Everyone should be treated equally in a civilized country. Thirdly,it is not benefit for establishing harmony relationship.All of people should live in a society peacefully.If someone was discrimated by other persons,the relationship would be broken.It is dangerous for a commission. In a word,it is unwise to jundge a person by their appearance not only for the one person ,but also for the other person.

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