作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其高级词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强。
Nowadays,with the widely use of computer,internet is now popular and is affecting our interpeople communication.Internet,brings a lot of webs,for studying,for making friends, for working,etc.More and more people have gone through the convenience and advantge of it.You just need to register with your own username and password,you can then acces to some website to know some other people from worldwide,which,makes the interpersonal communicaton much more easily and quickly.However,everything has two sides.While we are experiencing its advantage,we have to understand its disadvantage.Each website registeration requires personal information input,if internet's safeguard is not steady enough and may easily undergo hacker's strike,people will easily lose their personal information which publiced in website.So interpersonal communication needs a safer internet environment.
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