题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用。
It has been one year and a half since I came to university. To tell the truth,I had thought a lot of fancy things before I came to university,but in reality,it just imagined. I often felt sad because of my cowardice. Otherwise,it was very harmful for my development in college life. So I decided to change. During college life,there are various extracurricular which can improve our abilities in speaking thinking and performing. However,it is not the more activities you take part in,the abilities you will be improved. It depends on how you brace for the competitions. What is more,you should be a wise chooser,maybe there are many activities which are not suitable for you. Once you join in,you may feel much more disappointed,on the contrary. As a result,when you really devote yourself in the competition,whether you win or not,you must really gain a lot of things,which is beneficial for your life. With time going by,you can be a little more confident. All in all,it is high time that we should change in the college. No matter who you are and where you come from.