2005年1月英语六级作文真题:对病人进行捐助

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There is a sick man who needs your help. He was a healthy man and had a happy family not long ago. However, a suddent sick breaks his happiness.He cannot do anything but stay at the hospital. His wife has borned their baby two months ago. The sick man is in great trable.Although wanting have a healthy body,he has no money. He is short in money so that they cannot offert the bill in the hospital.He needs more care. If you have the capacity,why not give a hand to the sick man?With your help,I think,he will be healthy again soon.You can send a message or have a call to him. His phone number is 123321.