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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10533
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

In my perspective, dialects are not as acceptable in public places as Putonghua, not only because those who speak the same dialects are just the minority, but also for this behavior shows disrespect to the others. Take my school life for example. Dialects are not permitted in all the academic classes for we come from various parts of China and each one has his own dialect. What a horrible mess will it be if everyone only talk in their dialect? Besides, during our communication, none of us will speak dialects considering others' feelings. On weekends, in the subway, sometimes I will hear some passengers chatting in dialects, though it does not trouble me, I feel a little frustrated. Many of my classmates have the same feeling with me that we realize we are not the local people when we hear someone speak dialects. As is listed above, I believe dialects are not that acceptable for its restricted user ranges and unfriendly sign. When we appeal that dialects should be well preserved we'd better use Putonghua in public at the same time.

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