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Dear Sun Honglei, I will take a great pleasure in introducing Huang Lei to you who is my classmates and best friend.He is going to pursue his education as a postgraduate in your university after his graduation here. He and I have lived and studied together for four years.Needless to say,I know his qualifications just amply meet your requirements.For one thing,he studied hard and has gained a serious of scholarships throughout his university time.For another,he is so kind a man that every one of us is willing to make friends with him. Thanks a lot for your due attention to this letter.Any information you can provide as well as your introduction for him to meet the future tutor shall be appreciated very much. Yours truly Zhang Wei
