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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇基本功很好，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用全文结构较为严谨。
While I was looking through the question of the article, memorizes throughout my college life flashed back in my mind. I have evolved from a shy and quiet girl who didn't dare to speak aloud in public to a passionate leader with high heels and marvelous suits. Also, union and bravery are the brilliant qualities I have understood further during the four years. Recall the old days that I will treasure forever. I still remember the first time I participated in the ECOSOC conference of model United Nations. Not knowing the concrete process of the meeting, I just sat in the chair with a blank mind, listening to the speeches delivered by other delegates. Why no one had told me it was a meeting only allowing English speaking? I was awkward for I could hardly express my proposition in English fluently. Unfortunately, the chair, who was really strict in work, called my name and asked whether I wanted to put forward my opinions. Of course, I merely wanted to reject him directly but I could not conduct such a thing for I was the delegate of Brazil - the second largest developing country in the world which is supposed to play a vital role in the condition. So I went forward and said something impracticle, even ridiculous. How embarrassed was I at that moment! After the first session, I went back to the dormitory and surfed online for further information. And in the afternoon, things got better. I prepared well and delivered a speech in a fluent way. I pushed myself to raise my hand and to come up to speak in public. I really appreciate the opportunity to stand up and talk loudly. This experience is just an episode in the four years and after that time I take part in more activities and show myself bravely. What I have gain the most must be the bravery to speak for yourself and speak aloud.
