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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9039
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

With the rapid development of modern education.Internet on learning has became a part of people life.People obtained that information and knowledge by internet with advantage.Internet on learning is a kind of popular ,convenient,and important study style for many students. Although studying on internet have lots of advantage and obtain many great knowledge for us.But education doesn't simple mean learning to obtain information.for one thing,we should obtain advantage information and resist bad information for us,and great important is improvement we capable.for another thing,education meaning we should obtain all kings of abilities so as to we will can adapt increase society pressure.as well as improvement ability with face emergence.meanwhile,education the most important that instruct we how become a reality people. In addition,as far as i am concerned ,i am in favor of different kind education so we can obtain great development.

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