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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the ecnomic developent,people are using computer ,cellphone and electronic products to contact with their friend .Some people think it is very convenient to contact their friends or families abroad while others do not agree with it because the hight techonoly product has shorten their comunicate time by face to face. To my viewpoint, i think the the disadvantage of internet comunicate is outweigh the advantage.Indeed ,you can contact with your friend who lives far away from you,it helps you to maintain the relationship and also when you have sensative topic to communicate with your boss and colleague ,you can text her a mesaage.However,because of the internet,students spend all his time on computer and cellphone whcih are harm to their eyesight,The other hand is typing the keybord by fingers in a long time is not good for our health. In conclusion,we should learn how to use internet for intterpersonal communicate wisely.
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