过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;文中能较恰当地使用高级词汇,但存在较多拼写错误。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the ecnomic developent,people are using computer ,cellphone and electronic products contact with their friends .Some people think it is very convenient to contact with their friends or families abroad while others do not agree with it because the hight techology product have shorten their comunicate time by face to face. In my viewpoint, i think the disadvantage of internet comunicate outweigh the advantage.Indeed ,you can contact with your friend who lives far away from you,it helps you to maintain the relationship and also when you have sensative topic to comunicate with your boss and colleague ,you can text her a message.However,because of the internet,students spend all his time on computer and cellphone which harm to their eyesight,The other hand is typing the keybord by fingers in a long time is not good for our health. In conclusion,we should learn how to use the internet for Interpersonal communicates wisely.
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