过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中高级词汇表达比较恰当,但单词拼写不够认真。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the ecnomic development,people are using computer ,cellphone and electronic products contact with their friends .Some people think it is very convenient to contact with their friends or families abroad while others do not agree with it because the hight technology product have shorten their comunicate time by face to face. In my viewpoint, I think the disadvantage of internet comunicate outweighs the advantage.Indeed ,you can contact with your friend who lives far away from you,it helps you to maintain the relationship and also when you have sensitive topic to comunicate with your boss and colleague ,you can text her a message.However,because of the internet,students spend all his time on computer and cellphone which harm to their eyesight,The other hand is typing the keyboard by fingers in a long time is not good for our health. In conclusion,we should learn how to use the internet for Interpersonal communicate wisely.
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