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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4566
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇丰富度要加强;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the economic development,people are using computer ,cellphone and electronic products contact with their friends .Some people think it is very convenient to contact with their friends or families abroad while others do not agree with it because the hight technology product have shorten their comunicate time by face to face. In my viewpoint, I think the disadvantage of internet comunicate outweighs the advantage.Indeed ,you can contact with your friend who lives far away from you,it helps you to maintain the relationship and also when you have sensitive topic to comunicate with your boss and colleague ,you can text her a message.However,because of the internet,students spend all his time on computer and cellphone which harm to their eyesight,The other hand is typing the keyboard by fingers in a long time is not good for our health. In conclusion,we should learn how to use the internet for Interpersonal communicate wisely.

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