Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;能够使用一些不错的从句。
With the rapid development of modern society,increasing use of the mobile phone has became a part of people's life.There is a lot of phenomenons what people using mobile phone in any case,for example,people are crossing the street looking their cell phones,sometime work using their mobile phone and so on. As a result of,so increasing use of mobile phone appeared that all kind society questions and lead many important consequence of overusing it.For one thing,overusing mobile phone serious affected that people's study and life.Lost sleep the mainly reason is that overusing cell phone.For another thing,there is lots society pressure and family conflict duo to increasing use of mobile phone.meanwhile,more and more increasing traffic accident because of people crossing street looking at their cell phone. In addition, as far as i am concerned,i realized that we should use mobile phone In appropriate circumstances.
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