2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；能够使用一些简单的从句。

This is a sad story ,real and make me think a lot about life and human being itself .even thought writer adopt a funny way to tell story ,the reality and personality display on the person everywhere . there are many people like soaply ,when we are try ours best to arrival a goal and abtain thing that we want or desire .we must pay a lot endeavor on it which is just like his island .unfortunately and commonly ,we always failed in the last ,even the miles away from the goal is so close ,sometime we consider it have been the door of the success ,but with closing when come a close to it . you will realise the reality give you strong fist and crack down our hope ,there is no chance to repair it .I believe that among of us have similar experience like this .so did I .not any things or ending are beautiful shape we image .we never know what will happen in the next minute .maybe the present is the shine light of star ,the next will be the dark like depths of the despair . however ,one tinge I can promise is that the everything which yo say or did happen in the pass time must make influence on your future life ,this is a stable principle which have been made enough comflication .if soaphy did not break the glass ,he will have a chance to be a true man and have his own family and job .everything will be different .therefore something we missed ,we can not come again .some examples in our aside .the officias who in order to get power ,money and interest ,they UESTC unscrupulous divisive taction ,even thought they make clear the consequence of what they did .if you made a mistake ,you will be punishment .so you don't complain about what you are doing ,the life will pay for you endeavor ,I insist . the second question is the personality .I see everyone has it ,it is not related with which you are rich or poor .the key for life is you must have a respect attitude toward it .we must remember that we can not lose hope of life .