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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一��。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, there are more and more people judge a person by their appearance in life. as usual, someone with good faces is respected by others than the ugly one. Why have there been so many normal in our sociaty? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is the influence of super stars. Besides, more and more comfortable living environment lead people pay more attention to other aspects like the appearance. The third one is the influence from the other countries such as Japan and Korea. To sum up, the main cause of this phenomenon is due to enough material resource and the improvement of the life quanity. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, develop education and culture. On the other hand, develop medical. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of this.

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