2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

With the development of the society and the techonology,computer has played an important role in our daily life.Naturally,computer and man become good friends.But the relationship between computer and man is not so easy. First at all,a great number of people especially students are addicted to the computer,they play games on the computer and lead to they do not like study as before.Secondly,of course some of people can enrich their knowlege acorrding surf on the computer.In an other word,if people can use the computer properly it can help them a lot.Thirdly,computer has no consciousness and they can not suggest what should you do or what should not you do,the problem is that we can only by ourself to identify the things in the net ture or false. To sum up,computer is a good friend for us if we can ues it right,in the contrast,it will be harmfull to us.The relationship between computer and man all decided by man.