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The proverb "Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them"indicates and tries to teach us that in order to be happy person shuold improve the ability to deal with the problems.In other words,all of us will have problems in our life but the of the great importance is that we should learn to deal witn it. As a matter of fact,life is short.However,it is filled with different kinds of problems in our life,which indicates that life should be a wonderful journey if the traveler have the ability to deal with the problem on his road to the destination.Otherwise,he will be terrorized when problems happens to him and his life will be filled with disappointment.Once again it indicate that the important about the ability to deal with the problems. To sum up,the happiness ones are not who have no problems in the world,but have the ability to deal whit them.
