文章组织结构良好;多多注意文中错误的句子;作者词汇表达不够丰富,另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。
My hometown have a good changed.The farmar,my hometown is around from gree tree.Near my home is a clever river in which there were some fiish.But,the houses was poor and the street was crowded.There people was hard-working. Nowadys,the building is tall.People's life is improved.But,the enviroment is pollutioned.The river is so dirty that fish have get to go other rivers.