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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构较为严谨;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Some people say it's a period of appearance-first,which means if you have a good looking,you would be easily to get a decent job or be easily accepted by others.Yet,despite the fact that a good-looking is a important propotion of a person,we can't judge a person by his or her appearance. A good case in point is that the CEO of alibaba--MaYun,who is a great businessman without a good-looking.No matter what the book is paperback or hardback,you can't deny its values by its covers.In this case,you can't judge anyman by their appearance.Besides,no one has the right to judge other's appearance.Appearance is a natural gift that we can't decide that.Everyone wants to be a gorgeous and elegent man or woman.Even though we don't have a good-looking,it does't means that we are loser or whatever. All in all,appearance doesn't means everything.Don't judge a person by his or her looking.

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