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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
as the development of technology ,more and more people are addicted to surfing the abundent internet world so that the relationship between the families is thin.it's time to face the becoming serious phenomenon. why do we could prefer to play computer rather than comunicate with our families? it may be have three reason,firstly ,we can't show a strong self control when we become addicted to internet,secondly ,advanced internet teconology pulls us closer but we exchange infomations by network and frozen machine ,finally ,convenient and rapid internet pehaps make us become indifferent and lazy . there is no time to delay !put down your mouse and leave your screen,go down to the downstairs for something to eat and chat with your familier , please enjoy your real life instead of virtual life .
