2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

My hometown My hometown is in one of the cities in guangdong province. In my memories,my hometown is small,silent and warmly.In the morning,you can llisten to birdcall and chicken calls.This is very difficult to listen to in city.Peoples are very hard-working,The sunrise makes. The sunset but the rest.Whatever happened,smiles are always on their faces.In my hometown,you can eat the safely foods.Because most of foods are made by themselves.And the foods are also delicious.In the night,you can see many stars on the sky,and it is very beautiful.I love my hometown.