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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；采用了一些简单的从句；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
The impact of the internet We can see from above the picture,this parents are communicate with their son by computers,and the parents hope seeing again the next time by computers face to face.so the impact of computer is very depper. nowadays,more and more people used computers.because they consider that its convenience to peoples'life.but i hope people can communicate face to face. The reasones why i support the later are as follows.the first place,if we exchange with others by face to face,can we only enhanced our emotions.the second place,if over used computers,there are a lot of radiations for us,so that hurt our healthy.last but not least,we can feel the sense of genience of the other side when we face to face communicated.and we can better how to resolved problems. As far as i'm concerned,thouguh the computers conveniend our life,but we shoule to communicate by face to face to avoied many of people feel loney and seem to nobody care about somone.
