- 分享到:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
The impact of the internet We can see from above the picture,the parents communicating with their son by computers,and the parents hope seeing again the next time by computers face to face.So the impact of computer is very deep. Nowadays,more and more people used computers,because they consider that its convenience to people's life.Nonetheless I hope people can communicate face to face. The reasoners why I support the later are as follows.The first place,if we exchange with others by face to face,can we only improved our emotions.the second place,if over used computers,there are a lot of radiations for us,so it can hurt our health.Last but not least,we can feel the sense of sincere of the other side when we face to face communicated,and we can better how to deal with problems. As far as I'm concerned,thouguh computers conveniend our life,but we should communicate by face to face to avoied many of people feel loney .
