Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
The impact of the internet We can see from above the picture,the parents communicating with their son by computers,and the parents hope seeing again the next time by computers face to face.So the impact of computer is very deep. Nowadays,more and more people used computers,because they consider that its convenience to people's life.Nonetheless I hope people can communicate face to face. The reasoners why I support the later are as follows.The first place,if we exchange with others by face to face,can we only increase our feelings.the second place,if over used computers,there are a lot of radiations for us,so it can hurt our health.Last but not least,we can feel the sense of sincerity of the other side when we face to face communicated,and only in this way can we better how to deal with problems. As far as I'm concerned,though computers convenient our life,but we should communicate by face to face to avoid many of people feel lonely .