作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
The Value of University Life Many students to go to college really don't have a clearly reason, apart from the fact that --they do not know there are other things they can do or simply because their parents' request. What are you want to learn? What do you want to experience? Shakespeare said that:"All things happened in life are meaningful." The same as college life, all things happened in college life are meaningful. College life is the most special period in life that you are trying to shift from juvenile to adult. You not only to learn but also to integrate into the community. As we know there is so many students with excellent grades eventually life is not satisfactory,what's worse, some of them finally choose to commit suicide. It was out of our expectations! Why? College is not the same as junior and senior high school that achievement is everything. On the contrary, achievement is just a very common part of your college life. In my opinion, the university is a transition period, what you should learn is how to survive in society. The result is not important, what important thing is the learning process and methods. At the same time, the university is also a place where to perfect your personal view on life and values. You cannot just stay in classroom for studying, you should go out and participate in activities with students. You should enjoy romantic love. Learn to tolerate, learn to let go, learn to be strong! College life is brilliant full of temptation. You can waste it, of course, you can also be conscious of the plan! Your university, you are the master, but the reason makes it shine is that you enriched continuously.