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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4833[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Recently,a saying that"Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them"has been discussed fiercely.From my perspective,the implied meaning of the sentence is that intending to achieve happiness in a real way,we should deal with problems instead of scared. From my point of view,a multitude of examples can be found to illustrate this point.We all have the same example,when we face trouble in daily life,we are anxious and furious.But we will be happy extraordinarily for the simple reason that we have the great ability to deal with them which is complicated enough.In addition,it is wise to judge a person by his ability.Only by cultivating the ability to deal with various problems,can one achieve success more easily and be happy. From what we have discussed above,we can safely come to the conclusion that the ability to deal with problems plays an independence and practice in daily life.And the spirit of persistence and courage is of significance to solve problems.Only by doing this,can we make our life happily and meaningful.

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