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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4842
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

From the picture given above,we can observe that a conversation between a teacher and a student is going on.Facing the simple caculator the teacher given,the boy replies that he needs support.Apparently,the implied meaning of the cartoon is that a host of people,students particularly,relian on technology,which will produce a negative influence on education. Some reasons can be found to support my arguments.To begin with,with the rapid development of science and technology,a great many people lose the ability of independence.We can't solve simple problems without tech support,which exert a detrimental impact on our education,In addition,We are living in the society full of technology which impair our independence and creativity extremly.In school,over-indulgence on technology will bring huge negative influence. From what we have discussed above,we can safely come to the conclusion that we should carry out technology in a reasonable way.Only by doing it,can we make our life fruitfully and meaningfully.

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