作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
From the picture given above,we can observe that a conversation between a teacher and a student is going on.Facing the simple caculator the teacher given,the boy replies that he needs support.Apparently,the implied meaning of the cartoon is that a host of people,students particularly,relian on technology,which will produce a negative influence on education. Some reasons can be found to support my arguments.To begin with,with the rapid development of science and technology,a great many people lose the ability of independence.We can't solve simple problems without tech support,which exert a detrimental impact on our education,In addition,We are living in the society full of technology which impair our independence and creativity extremly.In school,over-indulgence on technology will bring huge negative influence. From what we have discussed above,we can safely come to the conclusion that we should carry out technology in a reasonable way.Only by doing it,can we make our life fruitfully and meaningfully.