拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Mr.Jiang Junhu, You have been highly recommended by several of our members as a speaker for the banquet that is an approximate six-day meeting of the Chinese Association of Red Cross. The place is Kunlun Hotel in Beijing and the time is 3 o'clock of September 6.The banquet is purely a social gathering.So we prefer a speech on an inspirational theme.I shall send a message to you which includes the topics that will be appropriate for the occasion. Please give me a reply at your earliest convenience that refers to the reward you want.As song as we have reached an agreement,I will send you more details. Yours truly, Zhang Wei