2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者在句法层面做的很棒；可适当增加高级词汇的使用量。

My hometown is a magical and beautiful place where is located in the northwest of China and it have a nice name that is Aksu.Welcome you to this beautiful place. Firstly,I want to show our famous dishes to our friend that includes Dapanji, mutton and so on,they accompany me all the childhood so that it means smell of home.As well-known,Xinjiang has been called the "land of melons and fruits" and it's reputation Hami melons watermelons grapes Turpan Korla pear fig Xingzi etc.Secondly,I hope you can realize that the folk culture about minority in Xinjiang.For instance,you can dance and sing following the music. If you come here,please trust me that i will show a full of delicous food and nice scenery home to you and you must be not disappointed!